Another chapter edited

Published on 11 June 2024 at 12:28

I just finished editing another chapter! Yes! A milestone reached. 

This is the edited end of that chapter. It's cute!❤

“Come with us, Tiina, dear!“ Reiko gave an inviting smile to Tiina.

 If he had not just flirted with Marina, Tiina would have followed that smile to the end of the world, but now… now she just wanted to get away from the two of them to lick the wounds of her soul alone like a wounded wolf.

 “With such a big group, it´s not a walk any more, it’s a parade. Thank you, but no,“ were her words. It wasn't really just an excuse.This group had grown a bit too big for her taste.

“That’s sad,“ sighed Reiko, but then he started to leave with the others. A moment later they were gone, leaving Tiina alone in the big house, accompanied only by a sleeping drunkard and a troll, who was hiding who knew where with a book. Tiina sunk into the very  armchair Reiko had slept in, feeling forsaken. She looked for solace, pulling the blanket she had covered Reiko with closer to her heart, tears stinging her eyes. Why did love always have to hurt? Why were  men like this – looking seductively into your eyes, and then circling around someone else, calling her милая? And why did her stupid and disobedient heart have to fall in love with Reiko again, when she had suffered a lot to forget him -  this creature who was so fickle and so selfish and so childish and, and… so faithful and so warm and so magical and so cute… Ohh!

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